Zwei Weisse Haie\Two White Sharks

This is an illustration I did to the Song "2000 Meilen unter dem Meer" ("2000 Miles under the Sea") by Subway to Sally on the Album "Engelskrieger" (Angel Warrior"). I think the lyrics are very powerful and the line "Zwei weiße Haie glitten grad durch deine Augen" ("Two white sharks just slid through your eyes") just stuck in my head until I put it on paper

Here's the song: [link]
Here are the lyrics of the song in English:

Two white sails just slid through your eyes
within them the sea is deeper than any measure ever went.
A storm is coming, with waves that were made to kill
that swallow every ship that ever laid anchor.

Two white sharks just slid through your eyes.
I can taste the bitter salt of the ocean in my mouth.
I still sense fear in me, how could I have ever believed
that there would be no doubt down at the bottom?

I am sinking. I am drowning.
I don't want to be in pain anymore.
I want to be where it is quiet:
2000 miles under the sea.

Two white wings are folding around your shoulders.
In the rush of the deep you are white and beautiful.
I am sure you are here to release me.
I can't swim any longer, please let me go.

A white light is swallowing the sharks and the sails,
is swallowing the sea and everything in me becomes quiet, so quiet.
Hear my plea and shut off the humming machines,
that are keeping me alive -- longer than I wish.

I am sinking...

lyrics and song belong to Subway to Sally
I did the translation, it's not perfect
media: scetch was pencil, scanned in and finished with The Gimp

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